Except as we venture to create,
we cannot project ourselves
beyond ourselves to serve and lead.
—Robert K. Greenleaf
My wife took a look at the first version of something I was writing not long ago and said,
“Dammit, man, that’s high school stuff.”
I have to tell her to wait until the seventh draft, it’ll work out all right.
I don’t know why that should be so, that the first or second draft of everything
I write reads that way.